This review is going to be a short one. I gave it 2/5 stars. I barely finished it, having to push my way through it. Admittedly, I skipped several scenes doing so. The writing was amateurish, which drove me away from the story, as well as the lack of editing. I know the books my husband and I have written are far from perfect and there are errors in them, too, but not to the extent this one had. It was most irritating trying to read it. Otherwise, I think the story would have been a great read with some elements of Lord of the Rings intertwined in it. I feel the author needs to have another go at it to polish things off for it be a good read.